Amy Green Poet Rhyme

Oww - My Butt!

Across the fields a gallopin' we went
Our mane's soaring with our speed
Exhilaration, delight!
Upon my beloved steed-
Exploring many a mile
Elation in my gut
Grinning a goofy smile-
Oh- but OWW - my butt!

A. Green

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Lynette Chachere April 29, 2010 at 9:48 PM lol.your poetry is fun girl. -Always&Forever LYnette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 29, 2010 at 6:28 AM lol, this sure is a fun read, butT I hope your butt's feeling better now :)

Qui Bee April 28, 2010 at 8:09 PM Very amusing. Great write, I enjoy reading your poems. Qui.

Edward Orozco April 28, 2010 at 7:11 PM good write! ed

Travis Tapley April 28, 2010 at 6:45 PM Oh, this was too good! Galloping hard and grinning and then realizing a sore butt! Wonderful poem.

Amy Green April 28, 2010 at 11:34 AM I took my brother riding today...he is a bit inexperienced and it wasn't his butt that was hurting! LOL- poor guy.

Michael J. Falotico April 28, 2010 at 5:56 AM made me smile sweetheart!!