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Oww - My Butt!

Across the fields a gallopin' we went Our mane's soaring with our speed Exhilaration, delight! Upon my beloved steed- Exploring many a mile Elation in my gut Grinning a goofy smile- Oh- but OWW - my butt! A. Green

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/29/2010 9:48:00 PM

lol.your poetry is fun girl. -Always&Forever LYnette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 6:28:00 AM

lol, this sure is a fun read, butT I hope your butt's feeling better now :)

Qui Bee

Date: 4/28/2010 8:09:00 PM

Very amusing. Great write, I enjoy reading your poems. Qui.

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/28/2010 7:11:00 PM

good write! ed

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 6:45:00 PM

Oh, this was too good! Galloping hard and grinning and then realizing a sore butt! Wonderful poem.

Amy Green

Date: 4/28/2010 11:34:00 AM

I took my brother riding today...he is a bit inexperienced and it wasn't his butt that was hurting! LOL- poor guy.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/28/2010 5:56:00 AM

made me smile sweetheart!!