Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Own Small Comforts

The tropical storm moves closer
Brings wind and choppy seas
From my window it's a gray mass
But ride out the storm with me

Trapped in total isolation
All alone in my pain
Even the joy of the Seagull
Disappears with falling rain

The rain brings it own small comforts
Water to make things green
Clouds to hold sun's thermometer
Time alone to daydream  

Sponsor: PD
Contest: Any Poem
Written: June 08, 2013
Posted July 02, 2013

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Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 12:42 AM Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Shirley Candy July 7, 2013 at 9:25 PM Beautiful words..!! congratz for being featured this week, Sara... *hug* ~ Shirley

John Posey July 7, 2013 at 6:51 PM Sara, Congratulations on the win...I found out some years ago that true friends are the ones you choose to ride out the storms with.... Hugs... Jake

Cecilia Macfarlane July 7, 2013 at 4:29 PM A wistful poem, love to ride out the storm with you : ) Terrific write and win! Hugs

Len Gasun July 7, 2013 at 9:06 AM Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Sara! It's a great write indeed which I extremely enjoyed this evening. Thanks a lot for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson July 6, 2013 at 5:26 PM Beautifully done my friend and congratulations...This makes me wonder which storm it was...Was it Issac last summer? Of course it was a hurricane when it hit us...Severe flooding and no power for a week...I have written quite a few poems about the hurricanes I have experienced if you would care to check them out - Tim

Skat A July 6, 2013 at 1:49 PM suave...... Sara, congrats :-] -Skat

Karen Anglesey July 6, 2013 at 10:38 AM Sara, your magic pen just flows with perfect lines.. Clouds to hold sun's thermometer, Time alone to daydream "...simple gracious beauty and congrats on your win :)

Suzanne Delaney July 6, 2013 at 10:27 AM Dear Sara :nature is such a solace . I love this winning write. SuZ

Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 8:52 AM A great congrats on your superb win, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May July 6, 2013 at 7:27 AM Sara, congrats on your win with this lovely piece

Eileen Manassian July 6, 2013 at 7:27 AM Beautiful, Sara....Congrats!!!!

Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2013 at 6:01 AM Lovely! Congrats

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2013 at 11:05 PM always missing you.... thank you Sara, for the lovely poem....... congratulations... from:Linda

Cherie Thomas July 4, 2013 at 4:23 PM I love your thoughts with nature and life and how you transplant it from, mind, pen to paper or should i say keyboard.....beautiful write, I to am a nature nut lol. Goodluck excellent write sara ty4sharing, and also taking time to comment on my poem. Truly value & appreciate your presence:) Cheriex

Bl Devnath July 4, 2013 at 10:47 AM Beautiful natural phenomena. Lovely done and wish you good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish July 3, 2013 at 8:08 PM Yes, as you say - rain can lead to cozy evenings but sometimes things get out of hand as they recently did with Sandy where I live. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2013 at 11:35 PM Well, your any poem is a good entry, Sara. I sure liked it.

James Marshall Goff July 2, 2013 at 8:45 PM Perserverance....Sara, you nailed it! Thanks for inspiration tonite! and stopping by my work! Jimbo

April Gabriella July 2, 2013 at 8:34 PM I really like this. :) Very nice write!

Russell Sivey July 2, 2013 at 8:32 PM Wow, Sara, you have outdone yourself with this incredible write my friend! I believe you have masterfully written a terrific and tremendous poem! What a magnificent piece, a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Joseph May July 2, 2013 at 7:35 PM beautiful poem Sara...well penned