Owl

short-eared durham owl
meditating over the dale's edge,
shadows the fields and folds
in elegant diurnal flight.

on windside,careful sight
may swoop to prey
and away.

your yellow broad-eyed look,
at once both sharp and distant,
holds me.
oh,silence,
oh ,wind on green,
oh. earth,
sky.

immense your held vision,
sphere without centre,
pied geometer of flight,
sketch your descent and ascent.

trees bunched by dry stone wall
call heart home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 8:28 AM
This reminds of this awesome animated movie called Legends of Ga'Hoole. It was about an owl trying to be free and take charge, etc. It was a genuinely great movie and I couldn't help but make the comparisons from that to this writing. The similarties with this writing of the Owl and of humanity are striking. People need to take a lesson from this. Beautiful setting you created.
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October 31, 2013 at 3:51 PM
I never saw that movie.I am honored you like my poetry,When writing this I felt myself up in the sky gloating on the wind and seeing the Dale below,Thank so much for your careful reading.Writng is very rewarding in itself but we want readers too...just a few"
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