Get Your Premium Membership


watchful eye on life from atop the tallest tree leaves tremble below fall to earth find resting place in silent flight it snatch prey 5/31/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/4/2021 5:32:00 PM
I enjoyed the story your tanka told. It's cool how you have the leaves trembling!! Congrats in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2021 5:02:00 PM
A vivid picture of the owl's nighttime activities! Congrats on your win, Eve! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2021 4:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Congrats on your winner. They are so quiet at night that they can be on you before you even know they are there. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2021 10:17:00 AM
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2021 10:15:00 AM
Owls are truly amazing creatures. Your tanka really brings them to life in your vivid slice of night life. Congratulations on your win and blessings for your day my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Yes, watch out for the owl above. Have a blessed day................
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2021 5:26:00 AM
Well written Tanka Eve. I can see it :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2021 2:36:00 AM
A great description of the predatory owl. Hugs.
Login to Reply