Owl

watchful eye on life
from atop the tallest tree
leaves tremble below
fall to earth find resting place
in silent flight it snatch prey


5/31/2021

naturetanka

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Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2021 at 5:32 PM

I enjoyed the story your tanka told. It's cool how you have the leaves trembling!! Congrats in the contest.

Kim Merryman

June 4, 2021 at 5:02 PM

A vivid picture of the owl's nighttime activities! Congrats on your win, Eve! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick

June 4, 2021 at 4:33 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. Congrats on your winner. They are so quiet at night that they can be on you before you even know they are there. Sara

Christuraj Alex

June 3, 2021 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

June 3, 2021 at 10:15 AM

Owls are truly amazing creatures. Your tanka really brings them to life in your vivid slice of night life. Congratulations on your win and blessings for your day my friend.