owl

watchful eye on life from atop the tallest tree leaves tremble below fall to earth find resting place in silent flight it snatch prey 5/31/2021

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:32:00 PM

I enjoyed the story your tanka told. It's cool how you have the leaves trembling!! Congrats in the contest.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/4/2021 5:02:00 PM

A vivid picture of the owl's nighttime activities! Congrats on your win, Eve! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2021 4:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. Congrats on your winner. They are so quiet at night that they can be on you before you even know they are there. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/3/2021 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2021 10:15:00 AM

Owls are truly amazing creatures. Your tanka really brings them to life in your vivid slice of night life. Congratulations on your win and blessings for your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 8:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Yes, watch out for the owl above. Have a blessed day................

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2021 5:26:00 AM

Well written Tanka Eve. I can see it :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/1/2021 2:36:00 AM

A great description of the predatory owl. Hugs.