Njeri Hunjeri Poet Free verse

Ovulation

Hold on, what?
Ha, this must be a joke
Private info found!
A little teary 
A little too sensitive
Too hot in here

Words fighting with words
Hallucinations winning the wars
Days and nights drinking too much
Now the body can't tell the difference!

Babies babies babies 
Screaming from the unknown
Mommy, girly,lady, Sally 
Rocking on a dubious dream

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 23, 2015 at 7:46 AM Ovulation is a wish...very sensitive writing Njeri. God bless. Love>>>rajat Njeri Hunjeri March 24, 2015 at 9:05 AM When I was writing the last stanza I was also thinking of a wish. Good observation. Thank you Rajat. Good day.

Julia Ward March 23, 2015 at 7:42 AM An effective final stanza, especially the last line, where you have cunningly brought in "rocking" associated with babies who have been born. The LIFE movement would approve your stealth... Pre-birth babies rock when their mom sways. Oh yes, it's a word to ponder and of enormous significance in a decision, albeit on a subliminal level. Julia, xx Njeri Hunjeri March 24, 2015 at 9:00 AM Wow Julia that's a very good observation. Thank you my friend for your comment. Good day.