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Ovulation

Hold on, what? Ha, this must be a joke Private info found! A little teary A little too sensitive Too hot in here Words fighting with words Hallucinations winning the wars Days and nights drinking too much Now the body can't tell the difference! Babies babies babies Screaming from the unknown Mommy, girly,lady, Sally Rocking on a dubious dream

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/23/2015 7:46:00 AM

Ovulation is a wish...very sensitive writing Njeri. God bless. Love>>>rajat

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 9:05:00 AM

When I was writing the last stanza I was also thinking of a wish. Good observation. Thank you Rajat. Good day.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/23/2015 7:42:00 AM

An effective final stanza, especially the last line, where you have cunningly brought in "rocking" associated with babies who have been born. The LIFE movement would approve your stealth... Pre-birth babies rock when their mom sways. Oh yes, it's a word to ponder and of enormous significance in a decision, albeit on a subliminal level. Julia, xx

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 9:00:00 AM

Wow Julia that's a very good observation. Thank you my friend for your comment. Good day.