Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Overwhelmed

when i am stressed
overwhelmed
my life spins out of control

always chasing my tail
feeling tossed about
no matter what i do
no matter how i try

my life still spins out of control
i’m nothing but a slave
to all powerful master
* time *

my heart my soul
my spirituality
are at their weakest
literally
bowing to the wrong masters
revering manmade gods 
    


AP:  3rd place 2020

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Mike Gentile January 29, 2018 at 9:23 AM I couldn't agree with you more, well done xxoo Line Gauthier January 29, 2018 at 12:36 PM Thank you, Mike. Much appreciate your visit.

Lewis Raynes January 28, 2018 at 8:52 PM such an interesting thought, makes us all stop and think, great write Line :) Line Gauthier January 29, 2018 at 12:36 PM Thank you, Lewis. Very appreciated visit.

Heidi Sands January 28, 2018 at 11:48 AM Good points , well written Line :) Line Gauthier January 29, 2018 at 12:37 PM Thank you, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud January 28, 2018 at 2:47 AM may we allow time not to control manisfestation of dreams, of spiritual journeys... lovely verse, line.. huggs Line Gauthier January 28, 2018 at 10:25 AM Thank you, nette. Best wishes.