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when i am stressed overwhelmed my life spins out of control always chasing my tail feeling tossed about no matter what i do no matter how i try my life still spins out of control i’m nothing but a slave to all powerful master *time* my heart my soul my spirituality are at their weakest literally bowing to the wrong masters revering manmade gods AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on January 27, 2018

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Date: 1/29/2018 9:23:00 AM
I couldn't agree with you more, well done xxoo
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Date: 1/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. Much appreciate your visit.
Date: 1/28/2018 8:52:00 PM
such an interesting thought, makes us all stop and think, great write Line :)
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Date: 1/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis. Very appreciated visit.
Date: 1/28/2018 11:48:00 AM
Good points , well written Line :)
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Date: 1/29/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/28/2018 2:47:00 AM
may we allow time not to control manisfestation of dreams, of spiritual journeys... lovely verse, line.. huggs
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Date: 1/28/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thank you, nette. Best wishes.

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