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Overtly Overthinking

Exhaustedly engaged in a losing battle Relentlessly rowing with a broken paddle Constantly convincing the judge in my mind Passionately pleading for the flaws I find Dreadfully driven to explain my side as true Willfully wanting to show my point of view Quite quickly I'd free, if only I could, this thralling need to be understood

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Date: 12/19/2023 6:04:00 AM
Hi Ximena. This is a very well written couplet. The simplicity of your words amplify the complexity of your thoughts. I like this poem very much. ZIM
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