Komal Walimbe Poet Rhyme

Overthinking

I Want to live this world amazingly
But the habit of overthinking
Has been making things messy

The what ifs are being overpowered
The big childhood dreams
Are being shattered

It's like living in a time loop
An unstoppable droll
To which I must reroute

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Darlene De Beaulieu March 8, 2024 at 11:44 AM Hello Komal, i agree with Bill. blessings my friend. /Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu March 28, 2024 at 10:53 AM Hello Komal, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/ Komal Walimbe March 28, 2024 at 6:16 AM Hi Darlene, thank you so much for commenting! :)

Bill Baker October 28, 2023 at 5:01 PM You are right, Kormal, you must change to thinking to change the end results. Don't give up, my friend, just try another path. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Komal Walimbe March 28, 2024 at 6:16 AM Yes Bill! Thank you so much for commenting, hope you are doing great as always! :)