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Overthinking

I Want to live this world amazingly But the habit of overthinking Has been making things messy The what ifs are being overpowered The big childhood dreams Are being shattered It's like living in a time loop An unstoppable droll To which I must reroute

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/8/2024 11:44:00 AM

Hello Komal, i agree with Bill. blessings my friend. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2024 10:53:00 AM

Hello Komal, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/

Komal Walimbe
Date: 3/28/2024 6:16:00 AM

Hi Darlene, thank you so much for commenting! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 10/28/2023 5:01:00 PM

You are right, Kormal, you must change to thinking to change the end results. Don't give up, my friend, just try another path. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Komal Walimbe
Date: 3/28/2024 6:16:00 AM

Yes Bill! Thank you so much for commenting, hope you are doing great as always! :)