Notes About The Poem

Overthink Words That Are Said

Do you ever doubt what other folks say, 
Do you mistrust their intent?
Do you walk around reworking their words, 
Living a mental torment?

Overthinking short bursts of simple remarks, 
Overthinking the words that were said,
Overthinking those comments filling all of your mind, 
Comments filling up all of your head.

If you are be aware that most of what’s said,
It’s forgotten, blown away to the sky,
Blown away and never considered again,
It’s just you that’s left thinking why.

Why did they? When did they? Where did they go?
Who is it they think they have seen?
Leaving you confused with thoughts of your own:
“I wish they’d just say what they mean.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Turner Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Fun and very very clever, Lewis:) It is a natural tendency to overthink or over analyze. I like this one a lot!
Raynes Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Daniel
Schiavina Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Excellent!
Raynes Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Thanks Frances
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 10:54 PM
So true but often hard to let go?
Raynes Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 11:15 PM
thanks Kim, yep
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