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Overstaying

drumbeat of hell-bent youth yet bids us onward graying, fraying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/22/2023 1:05:00 PM
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Greying, fraying, yes, tis the season. Ah, to turn back the clock! That would be nice :)
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Michael Tor
Date: 1/21/2023 12:08:00 PM
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The cycle of life my friend. Hopefully those gray hairs represent wisdom...
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/20/2023 2:02:00 PM
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Would that we could keep the young bodies...my mind is about 18, my body is 102. Where's the happy medium?
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/20/2023 10:02:00 AM
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A part of realitie's mandate. Forward, march! Longer than expected. Good call...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2023 12:24:00 PM
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OK. 'longer than expected!' Thanks, Anselmo.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/19/2023 7:35:00 PM
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And onward we go through the graying and fraying :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2023 12:22:00 PM
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As long as we have 'staying' power! Thanks, Heidi!

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