Oversleeping Beauty

catatonic overgrowth crept back in ~ the prince seen her hirsute chin By David Kavanagh

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Gary Radice

Date: 12/29/2021 3:30:00 AM

Thats one great Hairytale David. I want to know if the cat ever crept out again. There's also some wise crack comment about Rapunzel floating around in my head but I'm not there yet. All the best for The New Year! Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2021 3:49:00 AM

I’m afraid the cat wasn’t interested either Gary, she had overslept beyond redemption, Rapunzel now on the other hand could well be worth a second glance, go for it, Happy new year, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/29/2021 2:06:00 AM

Lol, best turn the lighting down, hopefully she had some tweezers in her Christmas cracker. Happy New year David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/29/2021 3:08:00 AM

Yuk, I think he changed his mind Tom, and went in search of Snow White lol, cheers David