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Overshadow

As we walked alone Under a golden sun By the water side Gazing unto her Holding her tight Under the wedging blue sky She puts her hands in mine Mine in hers Her lips on mine Bringing on me a peaceful bliss We were not alone We were just a shadow In the romance of the sun and sea But still, our romance Shadowed the affectionate sea

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/23/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 9:27:00 PM

Taiwo Lasisi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 9:40:00 PM

taiwo, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT