Override the Tide

why land mass subsides
       laws of physics can’t decide
        ~ as man now presides ~


Brian Strands
All yours 14
13/03/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 2:18 PM
David, congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Kim, I appreciate you stopping by, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:46 PM
I really like how you did this with rhyme!
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Thanks Andrea, I’ve a penchant for rhyming ku’s at the moment, cheers David
Neumann Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:02 AM
Sad story.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Ain’t it just, judge jury and executioner, cheers David
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