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Overpowering Love

HER LOVE IS TO MUCH
I CAN'T TAKE IT
THIS REAL GOOD FEELING
AND I CAN'T SHAKE IT

WHEN I'M WITH FRIENDS
I ASSOCIATE
AND WHEN I'M MAD
I BLAME MY FATE
BUT WHEN I'M WITH HER
I'M SLOW LIKE A TANK
I TRY TO TALK 
BUT MY MIND GOES BLANK

I LOVE HER SO MUCH
BUT SHE LOVES ME MORE
SHE LOVES ME SO MUCH
THAT I GET SORE

lovelovemei do not know?

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Samantha Drummond

April 8, 2011 at 4:50 PM

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Roxanna Johnson

April 8, 2011 at 8:50 AM

Awwww I love poems that are easy to read because they have a good rhyme scheme(: so i loved reading this.

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 1, 2011 at 4:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elijah. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 31, 2011 at 6:37 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme on love... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...