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Overpowering Love

HER LOVE IS TO MUCH I CAN'T TAKE IT THIS REAL GOOD FEELING AND I CAN'T SHAKE IT WHEN I'M WITH FRIENDS I ASSOCIATE AND WHEN I'M MAD I BLAME MY FATE BUT WHEN I'M WITH HER I'M SLOW LIKE A TANK I TRY TO TALK BUT MY MIND GOES BLANK I LOVE HER SO MUCH BUT SHE LOVES ME MORE SHE LOVES ME SO MUCH THAT I GET SORE

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Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:50:00 PM

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Roxanna Johnson

Date: 4/8/2011 8:50:00 AM

Awwww I love poems that are easy to read because they have a good rhyme scheme(: so i loved reading this.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2011 4:00:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elijah. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/31/2011 6:37:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme on love... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...

Constance La France

Date: 3/31/2011 3:44:00 PM

Welcome to the soup and I understand your words, sometimes the love is just too much to handle~~