Overload

Heavily, darkly, cracked by light and
 splintering shadows, cracking,
   scratching out thoughts like
     sandpaper grit,
       popping on the creases of my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 31, 2019 at 12:48 PM
This is certainly heavy. I appreciate the title and the simile of the 'overload' like sandpaper.
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