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Overcome By Life

The unfolding of a bleak mid-night moon, 
Formidable, throbbing, ghostly gray cloud, 
Swirling in rage, with wordless eerie croon; 
Affecting considerable angst shroud. 

Ravens frenzy, divergence flutter coup 
Through impenetrable tangle of trees.
Sinful, depressed, slate shadows wily drew, 
Leaden silk veil amid deceptive ease. 

Pinion she lies there, a dismal, frail frame.
Fragments of her life evanesce apace; 
Consume by repugnant stanch, it laid claim. 
Crumbling world turn upside down, fearful place. 

Neath celestial heaven alone she lies,
Looking up, overcome by life, with leaden eyes.


4/4/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Adams Avatar
April 5, 2020 at 9:51 PM
so many are depressed by this pandemic that moves about taking so many from us... we sit alone in darkness hiding from the unseen... powerful, poignant, well penned Eve... hugs and blessings
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 4:21 PM
So dark Jan, depressive incantations to be sure...
Leffanta Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Fortunately, there is always the cold light of dawn and the eagerness to bathe in its warmth! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Such deep dark and sad imagery Eve I can only begin to imagine the burden of dealing with and living with the cloak of depression, a poe like poem!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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