Jill Spagnola Poet Free verse

Overcast

Overcast

Waning crescent moon
                                                     lingers amidst ebony skies
                               …Cycling along with the force of the
fortifying sun rising
The fiery flower transitions the atmosphere slowly then
                                                                                            seemingly faster as a black background gives way to gray.






 ~jill

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Bl Devnath May 6, 2016 at 10:59 AM Beautiful imagery my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Jill Spagnola May 7, 2016 at 12:15 AM loved back :) B.L. thanx, jill

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2016 at 4:14 PM Like you are videotaping it!! A very interesting one. So different from your blitz style. much enjoyed, Jill. Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 5:58 PM Andrea, what a freaken awesome compliment.... your simile to "videotaping it!!" I'm glad it gave you enjoyment..:) Besides, I'm blitzed out! Always a pleasure to hear and read you:), jill

Demetrios Trifiatis May 2, 2016 at 1:44 PM Captivating poetic imagery that paints the coming of dawn in colors of splendor dear, Jill! A seven! Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 5:53 PM Your comments joyfully validate my aspirations to become a more accomplished poet :)''gracious as always dear Demetrios, with love & respect...jill