Overcast

Overcast Waning crescent moon lingers amidst ebony skies …Cycling along with the force of the fortifying sun rising The fiery flower transitions the atmosphere slowly then seemingly faster as a black background gives way to gray. ~jill

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2016 10:59:00 AM

Beautiful imagery my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/7/2016 12:15:00 AM

loved back :) B.L. thanx, jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2016 4:14:00 PM

Like you are videotaping it!! A very interesting one. So different from your blitz style. much enjoyed, Jill.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/4/2016 5:58:00 PM

Andrea, what a freaken awesome compliment.... your simile to "videotaping it!!" I'm glad it gave you enjoyment..:) Besides, I'm blitzed out! Always a pleasure to hear and read you:), jill

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/2/2016 1:44:00 PM

Captivating poetic imagery that paints the coming of dawn in colors of splendor dear, Jill! A seven!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/4/2016 5:53:00 PM

Your comments joyfully validate my aspirations to become a more accomplished poet :)''gracious as always dear Demetrios, with love & respect...jill