Overcast

springtime forecast
groundhogs shadow didn’t last…
day was overcast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wilson Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 8:52 PM
that ole groundhog did not know what he was talking about! very nice..love,Deb
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March 6, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Enjoyed...we have a family birthday on "groundhogs" day...so we always pay attention..its hardly ever accurate. lol. BG
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March 6, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Oh, I enjoyed this rhyming haiku, Robb. In fact, I think I prefer the rhyming haiku over the ones without rhyme. The groundhog's inability to see his shadow means we're supposed to see an early spring, Robb. From what I've been hearing from the folks up North, that's not the case at all. I guess Puxcetawney (spelling?) Phil is about as accurate as the weatherman. It's been a warm winter in Florida. Send this to Francine - she'll really enjoy it!!! Love, Carolyn
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