Overbearing Tree

The big tree casts a giant shadow 
Over the little saplings surrounding him 
Keeping them in thrall long after he is gone 

He tied them tight to the past 
Squashing their youthful spirit 
And forcing them down the same tired path
He took to follow for himself 

His tricks are many and branches are big 
The saplings need to take a changing course    
For their own survival and identity 

At every crossing of roads 
They must slay the overbearing tree
And disparage his legacy 
To live and shine with their own individuality.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 22, 2013 at 7:48 PM
The nice life trees, can give when given the voice... Love their identity... hugs.. Linda
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November 22, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Wahab,... Love the unique way in describing the ordinary tree ~:) Hugs* SKAT
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November 22, 2013 at 12:01 PM
very interesting. I enjoyed it.
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