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Over Zealous

Can certainly get over zealous at times In extolling my love for you souls Suddenly realize how overbearing it must be So I'll try to show a little more control Got a bunch of affection for all youse guys You all have that special something It's totally unique from one soul to the next Which gets this old heart a-beating Just love to discover what each person has Have I seen it before in someone else Each one of you adds your own little twist It determines everyone's wealth It's not the money you've got stashed away Or those fancy cars you might drive It's stuff you've got deep down in your soul It's the friendships for which we strive

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Date: 9/30/2023 9:30:00 AM
a beautiful, uplifting poem to read this Saturday morning. I can sometimes be overzealous too. I don't believe too much love can be harmful. I appreciate your loving friendship. Yes, we do strive for friendships, even on line. Connections are just vital. Have a great Saturday, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2023 1:01:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara! Love to hear you agreeing with me! Have a Happy Saturday xx

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