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Over White Waters

Over white waters, a vessel She goes dipping and bobbing, 'Cross the deep blue trestle Her captain nearly sobbing Hands at the helm Still, she does not steer, Just navigates this realm Nowhere else to veer Can she make land Survive on a whim, Over white waters' expand Be it sink or swim?

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Timothy Ray

Date: 8/6/2023 6:48:00 AM

a hearty Amen to that!!! but chance is the best dance to happen upon chance....loved it

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/14/2024 4:48:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words, Timothy ... I truly appreciate it :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2023 6:50:00 PM

Dear Kelly, you imagery is dramatic and thought-provoking. Life left up to chance... One should strive to feel a modicum of control despite the forces of fate conspiring all around. "sink or swim?" - a choice to be made. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/13/2024 6:14:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words, Susan. I truly appreciate it :)

Tom Woody

Date: 8/2/2023 4:40:00 PM

Let's hope to heck she makes land before the mornin' light. Aye

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/9/2024 6:40:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Tom... I think she will make it there just fine :)