Over the Hill

My teeth are all getting loose
and there's a pillow under my caboose.
It's summertime and yet I'm feeling a chill.
Congratulations, You Are Officially There.
You're old and over the hill Kidster Bill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:42 PM
lol sure made me smile Billy as for feeling the chill I am permanently cold lol I would wear my thermal vest all year long but its not quite a fashion feature with a t shirt lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Surely you're kidding. Don't pay attention to numbers, Billy.;)
Hoffman Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Welcome to the over the hill club! You look too young to be that though!:) Btw that was a funny little poem!
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