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Over Lime Green Hills

Sunrise came beautiful over lime green hills,
And soon warm butterscotch sunshine poured,
In brand new delights and summertime thrills,
As the heart of nature beat to its grandeur.

And soon warm butterscotch sunshine poured,
And from emerald trees the bluebirds crooned,
As the heart of nature beat to its grandeur,
In the hours before spills of midnight moon!

And from emerald trees the bluebirds crooned,
While grassy hills were stained with flowers,
In the hours before spills of midnight moon,
Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers.

While grassy hills were stained with flowers,
In brand new delights and summertime thrills,
Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers,
Sunrise came beautiful over lime green hills.
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 12:38 PM
We see and taste of this delightful pantoum! Hugs, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 3:41 PM
I am thrilled that you joined the feast. Thank you. :D Hugs.
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Your words created a beautiful picture. This is a lovely image of the early morning over lime green hills. I so much enjoyed this Pantoum. Blessings, my good friend
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:20 AM
I am gratified that you found these images pleasing, Lasaad. Dawn is such a serene and lovely hour. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a great day. Hugs, Evelyn :)
Salehi Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:46 AM
You drew a beautiful picture with words.
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Thank you so much. :D
Ball Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 12:06 AM
The sunrises and sunsets here in Alberta are magical. I love them. Great write my friend. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:28 AM
There are endless wonders and beauties in the natural world. Canada is very beautiful! Thank you, and enjoy your day, my friend. Evelyn :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 10:00 PM
Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers. This is a lovely line and brings a lot of imagery. Your pantoum is lovely. Hugs.
Buehler Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Your inspiring words are a bright spot in the day. Thank you for your expressions of enjoyment. Hugs.
Hankins Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:35 PM
I love your pantoum, Evelyn. You have painted a lovely picture of sunrise over the lime green hills. Beautiful images.
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Thank you so much for the thrill of your appreciation, Milton. Enjoy the rest of your holiday, my friend, Evelyn :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:18 PM
You paint a wonderful picture friend. Your similes and metaphors are awesom. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 7:25 PM
I'm so glad, Rama! I thank you with all my heart. :)
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