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Sunrise came beautiful over lime green hills, And soon warm butterscotch sunshine poured, In brand new delights and summertime thrills, As the heart of nature beat to its grandeur. And soon warm butterscotch sunshine poured, And from emerald trees the bluebirds crooned, As the heart of nature beat to its grandeur, In the hours before spills of midnight moon! And from emerald trees the bluebirds crooned, While grassy hills were stained with flowers, In the hours before spills of midnight moon, Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers. While grassy hills were stained with flowers, In brand new delights and summertime thrills, Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers, Sunrise came beautiful over lime green hills.

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Date: 7/7/2021 12:38:00 PM
We see and taste of this delightful pantoum! Hugs, Evelyn!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/7/2021 3:41:00 PM
I am thrilled that you joined the feast. Thank you. :D Hugs.
Date: 7/5/2021 11:12:00 AM
Your words created a beautiful picture. This is a lovely image of the early morning over lime green hills. I so much enjoyed this Pantoum. Blessings, my good friend
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/5/2021 11:20:00 AM
I am gratified that you found these images pleasing, Lasaad. Dawn is such a serene and lovely hour. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a great day. Hugs, Evelyn :)
Date: 7/5/2021 9:46:00 AM
You drew a beautiful picture with words.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/5/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much. :D
Date: 7/5/2021 12:06:00 AM
The sunrises and sunsets here in Alberta are magical. I love them. Great write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/5/2021 11:28:00 AM
There are endless wonders and beauties in the natural world. Canada is very beautiful! Thank you, and enjoy your day, my friend. Evelyn :)
Date: 7/4/2021 10:00:00 PM
Butterflies stirred breezes in quiet whispers. This is a lovely line and brings a lot of imagery. Your pantoum is lovely. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/5/2021 11:32:00 AM
Your inspiring words are a bright spot in the day. Thank you for your expressions of enjoyment. Hugs.
Date: 7/4/2021 7:35:00 PM
I love your pantoum, Evelyn. You have painted a lovely picture of sunrise over the lime green hills. Beautiful images.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/4/2021 7:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for the thrill of your appreciation, Milton. Enjoy the rest of your holiday, my friend, Evelyn :)
Date: 7/4/2021 7:18:00 PM
You paint a wonderful picture friend. Your similes and metaphors are awesom. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/4/2021 7:25:00 PM
I'm so glad, Rama! I thank you with all my heart. :)

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