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Over Indulgence

so welcome the rain arid ground starved of moisture… a paddle for wheels © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/5/2021 8:50:00 PM

Wow, creative from title to third line! This us super, Pangie

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/29/2021 11:40:00 AM

I always welcome rain, cuz I know how necessary it is for earth to thrive and for humans too, Nicely written Harry, Keep well.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/29/2021 5:44:00 AM

Good work. paddle for wheels. it is getting deep. lol

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/29/2021 2:06:00 AM

You are a master poet, indeed. This is one of your masterly works. Beautiful.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/28/2021 2:39:00 PM

I would welcome the rain with open arms, we are going through a relentless heat wave at the moment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2021 12:59:00 PM

thanks for your visit to my poem. And I think you guessed right that the reader of my poem was from England!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/26/2021 5:41:00 AM

Well done, Harry! Enjoyed your senryu! Last line is clever?

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2021 2:53:00 AM

That last line was clever, Harry, well writ:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/25/2021 1:26:00 PM

We are getting much needed rain. I enjoyed your senryu, my friend. :D

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2021 12:53:00 PM

Very nicely rendered Harry...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/25/2021 8:38:00 AM

Send rain to CA, major drought here. I liked this Senryi. Best, Panagiota xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 5:09:00 PM

I love this, Harry. It's so clever!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/24/2021 6:41:00 AM

Timely write Harry. Our June has been bloody wet, very needed too. A mate said the other day his water tanks are closer to full than they have been for 4 years, and winter has but begun. Thanks for these great words Harry.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/23/2021 12:23:00 PM

You are so right my friend, it either rains too much or not at all, we sometimes, like Cape Town, have a very long drought, like a couple of years back, followed by flash floods. A great Senyru. Your few words explain a great deal. Hope everyone can swim, perhaps there will be another 40 days and forty nights of rain and the world floods! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2021 1:11:00 PM

love it Harry we have had quite a dry spell will be needing a canoe when the rain finally falls:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/22/2021 12:06:00 PM

Hello Harry Horseman, Sometimes it rains too much. the ground gets saturated with water that takes time to soak in the ground. enjoy your day my friend.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/22/2021 4:34:00 AM

In India it rained very heavily past few days. I see sun today, a welcome change. Great imagery. Wonderful Haiku

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2021 4:22:00 AM

Never a happy medium, we get too little or too much. Hope you're well Harry. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/21/2021 11:09:00 PM

It did not rain, it poured. Great thinking.