Over Indulgence

Wow, creative from title to third line! This us super, Pangie

I always welcome rain, cuz I know how necessary it is for earth to thrive and for humans too, Nicely written Harry, Keep well.

Good work. paddle for wheels. it is getting deep. lol

You are a master poet, indeed. This is one of your masterly works. Beautiful.

I would welcome the rain with open arms, we are going through a relentless heat wave at the moment!

thanks for your visit to my poem. And I think you guessed right that the reader of my poem was from England!

Well done, Harry! Enjoyed your senryu! Last line is clever?

That last line was clever, Harry, well writ:)

We are getting much needed rain. I enjoyed your senryu, my friend. :D

Very nicely rendered Harry...

Send rain to CA, major drought here. I liked this Senryi. Best, Panagiota xx

I love this, Harry. It's so clever!

Timely write Harry. Our June has been bloody wet, very needed too. A mate said the other day his water tanks are closer to full than they have been for 4 years, and winter has but begun. Thanks for these great words Harry.

You are so right my friend, it either rains too much or not at all, we sometimes, like Cape Town, have a very long drought, like a couple of years back, followed by flash floods. A great Senyru. Your few words explain a great deal. Hope everyone can swim, perhaps there will be another 40 days and forty nights of rain and the world floods! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

love it Harry we have had quite a dry spell will be needing a canoe when the rain finally falls:-) hugs jan xx

Hello Harry Horseman, Sometimes it rains too much. the ground gets saturated with water that takes time to soak in the ground. enjoy your day my friend.

In India it rained very heavily past few days. I see sun today, a welcome change. Great imagery. Wonderful Haiku

Never a happy medium, we get too little or too much. Hope you're well Harry. Tom

It did not rain, it poured. Great thinking.