Over Come

as sadness streams down my face same as a river runs threw the mountains.  as it's  way's flow uncontroliing   as the wind blows wildly   trying to  blow u back to smiling.    granting us pass by all the suffering but  as we all have r crying ,sighing times  1 thing u must remember some will  fall and some  make it to cross the line.  but we must never give in  to the pressured days even those  we might go blind  but thats better then coming to die .   as  we believe  we will  always keep the stand    meaning will alway stay walking on the land and not down stuck in the damn sand. don't think i say that in fear smart remark . but i say that because I'm a man  and I'm one who's had it so very hard and gone so far. as u ask   me why i walk with my pride of loosing  the fear to die because  I've already came to fly.   as my  loved one's  screaming  for me  banging the living drumming .that had  my urging to cross   not coming to be  as i go back uprising with the living . my rivers come to flow smoothly flesh  as i  come to impress the best   achieve the finish as the best gave me there test. all it came to be  was a puppy trying to play. with be but as   the puppy grows   each each other d.s. speeds tend to grow slower  bet yet he's a bigger bother.  so  remember to watch challenging grows the calm wind   or snow   wont stay a young blow forever as u now know

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Date: 8/30/2015 1:01:00 AM
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