Over

Lack of communication leads to 
misinterpretation.
That's something this present 
generation deems to adjust to, 
because based on observation a 
lot of us tend to strive with 
limitations.

We want new ideas to serve as 
motivation,
We want motivation to serve as 
new ideas. 
Ironic isn't it? 

We care, we try, we love, we 
provide, and what's left? 
For most is mostly always 
taken, and execute no action.
I hear some thing's or someone 
who isn't talking and it's a 
deformity, like music with a 
distraction.

We create personas of 
imagined goals,
And built up pressure that 
builds a wall
Strong enough to withstand the 
truth but with reality and lies, it 
falls.

Don't overlook the ones you 
look over and go forward,
Don't overstep challenges but 
step over.

My oversight it's not to 
overwrite, 
I'm sometimes feeling overused 
or overwhelmed with plight.
Overturning the rules of the 
judgmental that say I'm 
simplistic  
They say my honesty is 
overbearing when I'm being 
overly optimistic.

Overlapping thoughts of 
success and oversexed teens
That overdose on drugs and get 
overly disrespected, 
And 'Over' is the word when the 
quest to be at your best is 
overly expected.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/18/2012 3:17:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Sara
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A. Rosario
Date: 9/19/2012 11:04:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/18/2012 2:12:00 AM
Rosa...thank you for your nice share...enjoy your great work:) have a blessing day.. Luv :)SK
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A. Rosario
Date: 9/19/2012 11:05:00 AM
Thank you very much, have a blessing day yourself as well
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