Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Oven of My Heart

by Michael J Falotico

                                               I had a dream when I couldn't sleep..
                                          I chased away tears when I couldn't weep..

                                           Released balloons that stayed in my sight..
                                        And watched them flutter in air with no height..

                                           I swept up letters that fell from my hands..
                                      Planted them in my mind where words now land..

                                           Gravity pulls out my thoughts and desires..
                                          In the oven of my heart that still burns fires..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 11:22 PM just watched the Tampa Bay-Kansas City game on TV..no contest..T.B. ran all over K.C.. now I hope and pray the GMEN do that to a certain green tam and I don't mean the Jets..oh... after returning from Florida I am sure I will look golden like gold finger haha... but it is fun for the Summer and did not miss any spots this year..since private house and beach area allowed ... no lines..uh..oh.. wish the bridge was closer.. Michael... luv always and forever ... my W.K.. your J.G. is dreaming ..oh

Gwendolen Song August 10, 2011 at 8:30 PM Great couplets here, Michael. Powerful images that stretch the imagination. I love it! Shel Silverstein wrote a little bit like this in some of his poetry. Of course he is now in heaven but one of my favorites still! Much enjoyed! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 8, 2011 at 3:15 PM Michael..I hope I am forgiven if my lines of Hideaway worried u luv... it was meant for the other half ... u are the highlight of my life and always will be luv.. your Jersey Girl in total beach mode peace today ..forever and always in luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 5:20 PM Michael u could never get in my way luv.. rather u are an open door to my creativity.. my emotions are being tested and I am conducting an experiment on me luv.. let u know how the final results turn out.. weekend was a bust but tried.. your Jersey Girl in reflective mode.. always with luv.. Michael ..remember that ...

Wilma Neels August 7, 2011 at 3:03 PM Told you I was forced to come back.. maybe I should have stayed away longer just to see if you would survive all the cab drama with you private jet in tow :) lol thanks btw

Dinda Minardi August 7, 2011 at 1:34 PM Yup, sometimes this is the only way to express ourselves. When talk is not an option. Great package you got here, Michael. :)

Wilma Neels August 7, 2011 at 12:09 PM That is the best place for them to come from.. Okay that is just my silly opinion.. Just for the record Nikko forced me to come back to the Soup lol.. Stunning piece of poetry and thought provoking as well.. Love W Wilma Neels August 8, 2011 at 12:42 PM Hope your day is going great MJF!! ;-) Michael J. Falotico August 7, 2011 at 5:44 PM mmm you two using my poem for chatter lol.. love reading you two... and yes I think Nikko is right about the haunting part... Go t sleep Hottie Sisters...zzzzzzzz Wilma Neels August 7, 2011 at 2:14 PM lol, no I haven't.. stop putting ideas into my head Missy.. Should I go with faceless or nameless? *foncused* Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2011 at 1:56 PM He won't-- trust me. He won't. Bwahaha! Right, Michael? Because if he did, we'd haunt him-- ok that just sounded too freaky O_o... and why not? I know you've been itching to post it ;) even just one? Wilma Neels August 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM You really think I should?????? :D MJF will kill us for this Missy Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2011 at 1:35 PM go post them! Oopsy! Sorry Michael, we are turning this into chat?? :D Wilma Neels August 7, 2011 at 1:27 PM I was doing fine with my dark writes remember? :D Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2011 at 1:01 PM huh-uh!! Me?? Maybe Wilma's talking about another Nikko here? :p admit it, you just missed the Soup too much ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 11:31 AM well get me a cold water hose to read this hottie again Michael luv.. deeply expressive feelings permeate and penetrate eyes and heart and soul .. such fervent emotions luv.. am feeling them also.. your Jersey Girl in angry mode cause I have no member page or access to much of anything else right on PS.. oh.. thankxxx be to Heaven for beaches..and puppies... and luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2011 at 11:07 AM Your title sure caught my eye! What a very intriguing way of putting it, Michael (and I was thinking chocolate chip cookies, lol) -- Really liked how this flowed, not only the words but the thoughts as well, of the ironies you put in here, too... really enjoyed this piece :) hugs your way!