Outside the Webs of Reality

outside the webs of reality in mind, we weave interdimensional idiosyncrasies illusions of grandeur held taught freshly filtered in a clear blue sky I drown in your ointment pressed upon my forehead of knowledge bathing naked a scented candle of lust edging past the boundaries into your labyrinth carrying paradise becoming free inside the breeze a ballet of more than just a mirror we disappear into one another green meets blue refreshed and anew palms bow I pin you to the wall in adulation the cross about to fall

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Date: 6/2/2020 6:45:00 AM
This poem truly amazes me and its closing stanza truly, truly magnificent. A wonderful find for me this morn as I explore to read.. A fav and indeed a gleaming gem too.. God bless...
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Date: 5/28/2020 11:01:00 AM
I was thinking this must be a subtle not so subtle overture to the Lady herself and lo and behold she comments, maybe... just maybe...nice write Tim!
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/29/2020 4:29:00 PM
Gotta be good for somethin'...I think I missed my true calling in life, colour stylist. I'm Winter.
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John Hamilton
Date: 5/29/2020 8:52:00 AM
You crack me up Leanne
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/28/2020 4:54:00 PM
Try Mozart, Don Giovanni. One thing I'll never be Hamilton, "Beige"...and those with me, are definitely not Beige, nor ever were or ever will be. Overture, Light the Lights, regards Bugs.x
Date: 5/27/2020 6:41:00 PM
Some strange dream you've got there Schmidt...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 5/28/2020 7:47:00 PM
https://youtu.be/o70HaIPGFUo
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/27/2020 6:41:00 PM
https://youtu.be/7fdAFmtq-o8
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