Outside the New Moon Shines

Outside, the new moon shines, a clamor of voices yell, “Come outside.” Remember. Last year, at this time we watched the eclipse of the moon. Don’t you remember? Horse had to kick from biting flies late that evening, connecting with the other horse. Intentions to be deliberated, faulty tempers are not always so misinterpreted intentions? Greater patience, with horse and rider leaves, nothing greater. Consider when you ride the horse, not to let the dust settle. Other you might want to consider. Future would be better, if freedom was worth the future. Building in nature’s breath as it fashions out the venerable old building. 3/7/2018
Repeated word in front and back of the sentence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 8, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Lovely imagery Eve..
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March 7, 2018 at 9:34 PM
What a clever form - and you did it so well. Congrats, Eve.
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March 7, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Well written Eve, especially with the beginning and ending repeated words :)
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