Outside My Window - Collaboration With Chris Green

The tree next to my window Waves with its leaves all day As if it thinks I'm lonely Or does it want to play? Its branches create shadows That dance across the room I wonder if it notices My smile full in bloom The small birds living in it Sing music to its dance From dawn to dusk I listen Smile at their bird-romance And then I see the butterflies With colors bright and true Reds and greens and violets Mixed in with shades of blue Don't think my bed is boring I never feel depressed For I just need to look outside To know that I am blessed *** June 7, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Maybe it's just the time of month or life, but this one has me teary eyed <3 wonderful piece from two wonderful poets. Love, love, and mo love! xomo x2
Walker Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:35 AM
I can hear each of you in this beautiful collaboration. Love the ending too. You two DO work very well together :):)
White Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thanks Lenna :) and I agree, we do!
Barden Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 7:05 AM
<3 (FYI - That is my highest compliment, and I rarely use it)
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 8:57 AM
<3 is only reserved for good friends :)
Ricci Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 4:30 AM
Afternoon Darren. Morning Chris. This is lovely. I can almost visualize who wrote what stanza and expression. I'm on the fence of the title. However wonderful poetry and expression is wonderful poetry and expression. May everyone be blessed as so eloquently stated with the ending. Have a wonderful day. Wonderful work entirely. - s m i l e --
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thanks my dear friend <3 :)
Williams Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Beautiful Collaboration Chris and Darren. Yes are we not lucky with Nature in all its Glory?....Maria
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 3:26 AM
I am glad you like this one :)
Sands Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 12:52 AM
This is so nice. Beautiful collaboration. Congrats to the both of you. Smooth reading too!
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Thanks Heidi :) I love this positive poem.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 6:15 PM
This gives me warm fuzzies, I can relate. Fave lovelies :) xomo
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 1:04 AM
thanks for the fav ma mo! hugs :)
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Oh so uplifting .Darren and Chris this is a lovely collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Thanks Jan, it's sweet isn't it :)
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Beautiful as a summer breeze...a fav
White Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks so much my friend :)
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