Outside My Window

9/21/15
Outside my window : new poet only contest Sponsor by Bev Smith


Stream hush a silent night, a wooden boat at its 

Coastline. Leaves are dancing to the air's drum 

while crested auklets are the musicians.

As I stayed by my window watching how  weather was quiver

As the sky was about to cry and lighten cracked it fire.

Birds flew off the stream and red palulu and

Walking iris leaves spread upon the stream. 

They beautified the boat as ornate object

A comical changed of climate as it all of a sudden bright

And a restrained of the rain. Mantle of the sun spread.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Juman Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 6:47 PM
This is excellent my friend you should have been NO 1.
Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:38 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
Inman Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Afolabi, really nice, very descriptive write. Well done!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Afolabi! Congrats on a fantastic win!
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:01 PM
Afolabi, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations Afolabi on your win.
Deschler Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Your words painted such wonderful images throughout this poem... Great writing, Afolabi. Good luck in Bev's contest!
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 9:08 AM
I just saw out your window and the view was magnificent. Great poem,good luck in that contest.A7
Nunez Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 2:15 PM
This is beautiful, AM. I think you nailed the contest with this entry. This is poetry... :-)
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Thank you very much for your pleasant comment I really appreciate it.
Pinet Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 10:05 AM
You did a wonderful job here, I read it several times and it slowly came alive for me. Emile.
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:25 PM
I appreciate your kind comment Emile. Thanks for shopping.
Dunn Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Sorry about that I wanted to tell you good luck in the contest but with this poem I think will win without any trouble at all, cheri
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Thanks for your love Cherl. Stay blessed.
Dunn Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Dear Afolabi Muideen Now this poem of yours to me forgive the pon but it's what i would like to see if I looked out the window of life, the beauty and power of your words reflect such mystical excellece of nature, love itcheri
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comment Cherl I really appreciate it.
Chircop Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Thankyou for letting me gaze outside your window, a beautiful scene indeed, and so the sound of music.
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:19 PM
I do appreciate your kind words and thanks for gaze outside my window with me.... Stay blessed.
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Very poetic work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Sara. I love your kind comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 5:35 AM
Outside the window your inspiration came and carried you on her lofty wings, making you the poet you are, dear A.M!
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Thank you very much Demetrios I really appreciate your kind comment.
La France Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 11:08 AM
AM , this is lovely and thanks for visiting my poem, nothing ...
Muideen Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Thank you for you comment I do appreciate it.
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