Outside My Window

Outside my window
I’m being hunted by a little black crow
He’s circling my house like I’m on death row.
He’s waiting to attack, but he doesn’t think I know,
I’m being hunted by a little black crow...

He’s driving me crazy,
so I turned on the gas stove.
As soon as he heard the switch,
he flew into a nearby cove.
Tic.. tic.. BOOM!
Was the sound of the gas stove,
my body was ripped like pulling on green cloves.
Looks like I was killed by a little black crow


-Shane P. 9/14/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pillay Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Thanks guys for you support :D
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:11 AM
Very good congrats x Wendy
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Shane! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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September 28, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Shane, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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