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Outside My Window

Outside my widow All the strange sights to see Can't overwhelm me With panes of glass in between I open the shutters To glimpse all that's outside I take in the great wonders From my safe haven, inside Content to admire from afar A nature I'll never know up-close A whole world in a sheet of glass Outside my window September 13, 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/10/2017 12:25:00 AM

This reminds me of the great Emily Dickinson... thoughtful, dreamy and sheltered...content in the musings of her own mind. Beautiful! Always, Laura

James Inman

Date: 9/30/2015 1:09:00 PM

"A nature I'll never know up-close," leaves the reader wondering. Lovely write and I love and agree with Ian's comment.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 9/29/2015 5:06:00 AM

Well done congrats xxxx Wendy

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/29/2015 2:01:00 AM

A whole world to congratulate you on your win Kiley!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2015 11:40:00 PM

Very wonderful take on the theme Kiley! Congrats on a fantastic win!

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 10:59:00 PM

Kiley, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**

Jan Terry

Date: 9/28/2015 7:15:00 PM

Kiley, congrats on your win and welcome to Poetry Soup. I am new to this community also. I find everyone to be very friendly, helpful and encouraging. Hope to read more of your poetry as time goes on. Hugs. :) Janece

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2015 2:54:00 PM

Kiley, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/13/2015 10:12:00 PM

Hello Kiley, it's a whole world on the outside. :) Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT