Outside My Window

On the cold floor I jerk awake,
And like a miracle a light shines,
I stand on my toes and look,
Outside my tiny window the sun is risin',
I can almost feel its rays,
Caressing my cold clammy skin,
Outside the land is barren.
It’s all barbed wire surrounding me…Tall and forbidding.
But outside I see freedom,
I can taste it though from afar,
Outside I see the sun wink at me,
I ‘am another day closer to freedom.

By marion mwangi
11/sept/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Love your write, Marion. I can feel the determination and hope. Well done!
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:08 AM
Well done congrats xxxx Wendy
Mwangi Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:24 AM
thanks Wendy
Cheema Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Congrats on your win Marion!
Mwangi Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:23 AM
thanks very much Cheema
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Marion! Congrats on a fantastic win!
Mwangi Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:23 AM
thanks Dr.Upma very much
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September 28, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Marion, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
Mwangi Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:21 AM
Hie SKAT thank you.
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