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For Just Jan 2025 Posted Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Outside, by my front door, I count twelve things. Can you count more? When I go out to take the air, a snail and butterfly greet me there, and I always see someone - a lizard out in the sun. A spider plucks his silvery strings which he also uses to catch flies and things. Uhoh, the snail is going somewhere, but a caterpillar beats him there. In the soil, where up spring plants, I see a regiment of ants. They march along in formation, members of the six-legged nation. In the tree a robin sings. Hey, what's that - a hummingbird with rotary wings! Let's not forget to take stock of all the things under the rock. A rolly polly rolls up cuz he's shy. A centipede with a hundred legs strolls by. When you go outside, what can you count? Can you find a higher amount? I'm scared of too many things outside. I'm going back into my house to hide.

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Date: 1/31/2025 10:30:00 AM
David, a big CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, creative poem! Janice
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David Crandall
Date: 1/31/2025 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 1/30/2025 1:13:00 PM
LOL…like let’s make a deal…rock number 1 and 2 may be ok but don’t go for it all. What is worse is when those scary things make it inside.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2025 7:45:00 AM
What is better than science is the poet’s eye, perhaps we see more, perhaps we save a life with our observations! Hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 1/30/2025 7:30:00 PM
I had to make an admission here. Though I don't really know much about them scientifically, ever since I was a kid, I've been fascinated by bugs, in all there nearly infinite variety. I really believe they are unappreciated. You just need (figuratively) embrace the little guys - I don't think you're convinced (LOL)
Date: 1/30/2025 4:50:00 AM
Some creatures outside the door are beautiful and some birds like Robin have melodious voces. On the other hand if we meet more of the disgusting and allergic creatures we want to go back inside the house.A nice poem
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David Crandall
Date: 1/30/2025 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Akham! I like almost all of the creatures. For a while, I hated squirrels because they were eating all the avocados off my tree, and rats...not too crazy about them!

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