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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 24 sponsored by Poetry Contest 

Outside My Front Door

Outside, by my front door,
I count twelve things.  Can you count more?
When I go out to take the air,
a snail and butterfly greet me there,
and I always see someone -
a lizard out in the sun.
A spider plucks his silvery strings
which he also uses to catch flies and things.
Uhoh, the snail is going somewhere,
but a caterpillar beats him there.
In the soil, where up spring plants,
I see a regiment of ants.
They march along in formation,
members of the six-legged nation.
In the tree a robin sings.
Hey, what's that - a hummingbird with rotary wings!
Let's not forget to take stock
of all the things under the rock.
A rolly polly rolls up cuz he's shy.
A centipede with a hundred legs strolls by.
When you go outside, what can you count?
Can you find a higher amount?
I'm scared of too many things outside.
I'm going back into my house to hide.
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Canerdy Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 10:30 AM
David, a big CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, creative poem! Janice
Crandall Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Janice!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 1:13 PM
LOL…like let’s make a deal…rock number 1 and 2 may be ok but don’t go for it all. What is worse is when those scary things make it inside.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 7:45 AM
What is better than science is the poet’s eye, perhaps we see more, perhaps we save a life with our observations! Hugs
Crandall Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 7:30 PM
I had to make an admission here. Though I don't really know much about them scientifically, ever since I was a kid, I've been fascinated by bugs, in all there nearly infinite variety. I really believe they are unappreciated. You just need (figuratively) embrace the little guys - I don't think you're convinced (LOL)
Singh Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 4:50 AM
Some creatures outside the door are beautiful and some birds like Robin have melodious voces. On the other hand if we meet more of the disgusting and allergic creatures we want to go back inside the house.A nice poem
Crandall Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Thanks Akham! I like almost all of the creatures. For a while, I hated squirrels because they were eating all the avocados off my tree, and rats...not too crazy about them!
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