Outside It Rains

Your hair is moistened
from mist of rain
Your feet nudges mine

Outside it rains
air and water dance
Upon the roof like wings beating

Love me as you love the rain
sing to me softly
as you sing to the rain

Sing to me with a moist kiss
for yours is the face of night
in your eyes lies unhurried lightning

Together we shiver and burn
Compelled by  your fingers of flame
waves of water surge your breath

Love me closely as the rain pours
each droplet sings a far away message
announcing the night as it arrives in our bed

Enter falling footsteps of the rain
footsteps of water that dampens your eyes
lips of water that caress my forehead

We lay drenched and burning with fever
The rain speaks softly like the wings of endless bats
no-one but us is going to listen but us...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Ken What a passionate and loving write. I could feel the burning desire in every line. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Chaos poem.
Carroll Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Thank you Robin..
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August 31, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Hello Ken, Nice to meet you and read some of your lovely writings. You seem to be a man in love. Nice words and flowing in such a beautiful style. Keep it up...Thank you for visiting me. Come back again. As Always, Shar
Carroll Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Hi Sharon, Thanks for visiting and leaving a lovely comment.. Regards, Ken..
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:28 PM
- Well done.. this poem I like a lot Kenneth. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Anne for visiting and your kind words... Ken..
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