Outside At Recess

Outside at recess
How I love to play
On the merry-go-round
What a joyous day

Then some older boys
Come and start to  push
Spinning it around
Getting it to go faster

I become afraid
Having trouble holding
On, afraid to jump, afraid to stay
Then more older boys

Add speed to the fun
Terrified with head spinning
I fall to the ground
Under the merry-go-round bam

The construction of the 
Plaything wasn't a pretty 
Sight from underneath 
Long screws were hanging down

It shredded my dress
My undergarments too
Tore up my flesh
I was black and blue

Was it innocent
Just a childhood game
Or was it malicious
A sadistic game


(This is from my childhood.  Years ago.  Playground equipment was made different from the 
modern hard molded plastic of today. It was a wooden floor that was fastened down with 
screws.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/13/2010 9:00:00 AM
uhoh let me at them, I will have to knock some sense into them.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 5:09:00 PM
oops, sorry I called you sue. It's SARA, gotta remember that!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 5:08:00 PM
Sue, did you actually write this while in your childhood? That would be quite impressive if you did!! You made me remember the merry go round and I sure am happy I did not have this experience. However, a guy used to chase me home with a snake or something. YUK. (oh, thanks for your comments, and about avatar, it is not really scary. NOTHING like STephen King. hahaha. LUv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 11:29:00 AM
It is of the sad fact of the mind's small picture within God's larger picture Love. Sara! Humanity is here to learn the difference.Smile. The sadness of mean things done in the world, are bewilderments to a loving mind oriented on it's heart of Love. beautiful write, Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 9:02:00 AM
Gosh, I hate to think someone would tamper with playground equipment. Hope this didn't really happen. Very compelling write, Sara! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 8:22:00 AM
True to life sadly Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 7:18:00 AM
Hi Sara, kids can be awfully mean sometimes can't they. Feel so sorry for the young one scared half to death. Glad she ended up okay! As always a pleasure to read Sara. Keep writing so we can keep reading, we learn and grow from each other, smile. Love Light Patty
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2010 6:52:00 AM
Ouch Sara, kids can be little demons in the playground >> James
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter