Outside

Today did you look outside,
birds are singing as the leaves are falling.
Beautiful leaves are covering the ground,
squirrels are scampering all around.
Date Written: 10/29/2021
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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Hello Paula Goldsmith, A beautiful scene you paint with your words. Hugs.
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November 1, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Hello Paula, You did a lovely job Paula. Hugs& Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, I was painting with my words. Have a blessed autumn day..............
Skelly Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:06 PM
We have foxes and birds but never a squirrel until lately. Pretty little things hopefully I will get regular visits...Delice
Goldsmith Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Thanks for reading and for writing. Squirrels love peanuts. Our other home had a ton of them. I got bags of peanuts in their shells to throw out to them. When they are full, they will then hide them. Glad you like my "Outside" write. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day..............
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Perfect Paula. Yes, I have and looked on my walk too. I see what you have described. I hope you have a nice day :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Thanks for reading and for writing. This time of the year is a nice time for a walk. Glad you like my Outside write. Have a blessed autumn day..............
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