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Outside

Today did you look outside, birds are singing as the leaves are falling. Beautiful leaves are covering the ground, squirrels are scampering all around. Date Written: 10/29/2021 BITE SIZE POEM no25 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/30/2021 12:24:00 PM

Hello Paula Goldsmith, A beautiful scene you paint with your words. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2021 10:42:00 AM

Hello Paula, You did a lovely job Paula. Hugs& Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/31/2021 12:47:00 PM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, I was painting with my words. Have a blessed autumn day..............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/29/2021 6:06:00 PM

We have foxes and birds but never a squirrel until lately. Pretty little things hopefully I will get regular visits...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/30/2021 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for writing. Squirrels love peanuts. Our other home had a ton of them. I got bags of peanuts in their shells to throw out to them. When they are full, they will then hide them. Glad you like my "Outside" write. Have a beautiful/blessed autumn day..............

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/29/2021 8:48:00 AM

Perfect Paula. Yes, I have and looked on my walk too. I see what you have described. I hope you have a nice day :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/29/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for reading and for writing. This time of the year is a nice time for a walk. Glad you like my Outside write. Have a blessed autumn day..............