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Outshined

Lord bless the nihility of spirit and entity 'cause my mind is pallid like a deaf actor in a silent film but I'm not craven just frowned and mortal antique in the name of a poetic justice hesitating no more sleepwalking in time one of the nervous eaters I'm the oxygen moron joining the armies of heavenly damned to luminize the libretto at vanishing point wounded and mesmeric never mind the bollocks whatever they say I'll always complain

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/19/2016 4:59:00 AM

Wonderful piece. Congrats William, for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 5/18/2016 9:49:00 AM

Nice...:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2016 12:18:00 PM

- Hi William :) - Thanks for your first poems, interesting and well written:) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)

William Greco
Date: 5/11/2016 4:01:00 PM

glad you like it, there's more to come.. I'm mainly oriented on surrealism and imagery in my poems, I like to play with words and write free - guess I'm not a perfectionist... thanks for welcoming me

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:47:00 PM

William, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

William Greco
Date: 5/11/2016 3:59:00 PM

sorry for late reply, I didn't notice your message... thanks for your welcome, I'm getting settled here slowly, but for lack of free time I'm slow at this, but I think I'll get to know more poets here and read more, thanks!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 6:36:00 AM

William, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

William Greco
Date: 5/2/2016 11:42:00 AM

thanks once again for very warm welcoming and commenting Linda:) yes I'm new here and I'm looking for a good reads and occasional discussion on poetry.. I read some random poems of yours and I was really interested! I'll check more when I'll have more time, thanks. Hope I will impress with my poems too. cheers - W.G.