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Outshine In Night Time

Alternate forms times

Illustration expressive

Bye shadowed.. instigation



For rick Parise's shadows & form contest..

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/8/2012 3:36:00 PM

Oh, a haiku, been seeing lots lately!:) This certainly gives offers light, Joe, this mysterious form. Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Judy Ball

Date: 1/28/2012 4:36:00 PM

The thing with this type of poem is to say much with few words. You do this very well as always. God Bless, JB

James Fraser

Date: 1/2/2012 3:30:00 PM

Alternate illustrations stir up our instigations, writers prerogative and allowance. Cracking Haiku Joe and it's good to see you here. My poem of the lady in the dress is no dream. She exists, as this link will witness. I'm a very lucky guy :) http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena-2.php

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/30/2011 7:19:00 PM

Great haiky Joe, it is a form I am learning about. Hard to pack a message into so few words but this is says a lot.

Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 10/30/2011 7:19:00 PM

haiku - sorry!!!

Date: 9/26/2011 5:53:00 PM

Interesting use of this concise form. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your comment. Karen

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 8/27/2011 4:33:00 PM

Fabulous haiku Joe.Appreciate your lovely comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 11:15:00 PM

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Joe. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/10/2011 2:51:00 PM

This night poem is quite evocative. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2011 4:26:00 AM

There seems to be something about the very ealy wee hours that makes time seem to stand still and for a little while all is at peace. I love to walk with my dogs at this time. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 7/3/2011 3:52:00 PM

First of all, good luck in the contest. I like this. You are an intriguing writer Joe.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2011 5:10:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 6/27/2011 9:43:00 AM

Nice job my friend. The night is alive with a thousand different sights and sounds. You just have to be there to experience it. God Bless, JB

Don Johnson

Date: 6/25/2011 3:22:00 PM

Looking good to me, not n authority, Yes i had 5 attacks by white ant, usually skirting boards eaten... Diesel stinks a bit, none 4 twelve months. they don't like the sauce. Shriek till they're hoarse... on ya mate, Don

James Foulk

Date: 6/21/2011 8:56:00 PM

a very nice Haiku, enjoyed reading it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 3:05:00 PM

so deep and heavily intense Joe.. good luck in the contest and thankxx for your vote of confidence in my IMAGES entry..means so much and appreciate the encouragement too..luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/20/2011 8:52:00 AM

Hey Joe, how's the summer treating you?? Enjoyed reading this little popper poem.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/19/2011 3:04:00 PM

Wow good one . A winner I think. Anne

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2011 12:06:00 PM

Exquisitely written, Joe. You make the reader "think" with ths one. Rick is sure to appreciate it. Wishing you success in his contest! Love, Carolyn

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/19/2011 8:51:00 AM

Hi Joe! "instigation", a prompt that you've certainly used as an inspiration here! Happy Father's Day!! Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki Good luck with the contest...you're a winner, probably twice, for your entry.:)