Outshine In Night Time

Oh, a haiku, been seeing lots lately!:) This certainly gives offers light, Joe, this mysterious form. Best wishes, Love, Mikki

The thing with this type of poem is to say much with few words. You do this very well as always. God Bless, JB

Alternate illustrations stir up our instigations, writers prerogative and allowance. Cracking Haiku Joe and it's good to see you here. My poem of the lady in the dress is no dream. She exists, as this link will witness. I'm a very lucky guy :) http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/lorena-2.php

Great haiky Joe, it is a form I am learning about. Hard to pack a message into so few words but this is says a lot.

Interesting use of this concise form. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your comment. Karen

Fabulous haiku Joe.Appreciate your lovely comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Joe. Love, Carol

This night poem is quite evocative. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

There seems to be something about the very ealy wee hours that makes time seem to stand still and for a little while all is at peace. I love to walk with my dogs at this time. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

First of all, good luck in the contest. I like this. You are an intriguing writer Joe.

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Nice job my friend. The night is alive with a thousand different sights and sounds. You just have to be there to experience it. God Bless, JB

Looking good to me, not n authority, Yes i had 5 attacks by white ant, usually skirting boards eaten... Diesel stinks a bit, none 4 twelve months. they don't like the sauce. Shriek till they're hoarse... on ya mate, Don

a very nice Haiku, enjoyed reading it.

so deep and heavily intense Joe.. good luck in the contest and thankxx for your vote of confidence in my IMAGES entry..means so much and appreciate the encouragement too..luv..

Hey Joe, how's the summer treating you?? Enjoyed reading this little popper poem.

Wow good one . A winner I think. Anne

Exquisitely written, Joe. You make the reader "think" with ths one. Rick is sure to appreciate it. Wishing you success in his contest! Love, Carolyn

Hi Joe! "instigation", a prompt that you've certainly used as an inspiration here! Happy Father's Day!! Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki Good luck with the contest...you're a winner, probably twice, for your entry.:)

Unique presentation, Joe! I don't know how Rick will judge these very differing poems he is getting from lines and shadows!

A visual created with great and apt images, Joe

originality at ots best, joe.. winning wishes... huggs! :)