Outpouringsn Open Form

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

OUTPOURINGS
the ultimate
functions
of sheer will
 an absolute
criterion
pursuing
convention

emotion
 hovers
on the verge
&  wanders
into
the
 collective
 whisper

a teemimg
triumphant
finality
 disappering
with
enriched
significance

an  ominous
reality
undecipherable
a corollary
in a
 linear perspesctive
 a attempt
to achieve
consciousness

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