Outlooks a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

OUTLOOKS A shifting play of angles multilayered that morph into landscaped abstractions already enmeshed about to embark the density dissipates time with lights &sounds flickering thr awake hushed &enshrined by the curious white seeps through from underneath a blossoming light from memory that glimpse of nature blurs the boundary between temporarlilty & the transient becomes the frame to inhabits it to savour every fleeting element

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