Outlooks a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

OUTLOOKS
 A shifting
   play of angles
multilayered
that morph
into
 landscaped
abstractions
 already
 enmeshed
 about to
embark
the density
 dissipates time
with
 lights
&sounds
flickering
thr awake
 hushed
&enshrined
by the  curious

white seeps
 through
from underneath
 a blossoming
 light from memory
that glimpse
of nature
blurs
 the boundary
between
temporarlilty
& the transient
 becomes
the frame
to inhabits it
 to savour
every
fleeting
element

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