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Outlook of New Love

Expressive outlook brings out emotions quick Bold duality glimmers and truly shines. No separations desired between the pick. Feelings envelope binding them just like vines Devotion un-swayed by lies or any trick. Separations each day build up like cheap wines New love serves the soul, graces the minds visions Chills, tingles the body, conveys new missions Not wiser, integrated they explore much. Tantalized, involved, imagining with time, Forever the love will grow, along with such, Fortitude with no need for failure to climb, Their arms and bodies will always and now clutch. While the passion with tenderness so sublime, Builds each passing moment, till hours they submit. To the pressures, formalities, forth to wit

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Date: 12/10/2010 3:29:00 AM
Great one.. I am sure that it will be in the winner's circle..My Ottava Rima is totally fictional except it is about falling in love with poetry soup and other poetry internet sites..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:46:00 PM
A beautiful expression of love, Cecil. And you work with ease in the ottava rima form. Instead of a "first love" story, you gave us feelings! Bravo! Best wishes in the contest. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 7:33:00 PM
A grand write Cecil my friend and good luck in Jared's new contest with this difficult form.. u have done it proud with your expressive words ..with luv..
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Date: 12/9/2010 5:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry today Cecil. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 8:57:00 PM
i have to say that i hear your voice through your beautiful words, cecil.. a pleasure to read this agile poem which will surely be rated high in the contest... warmest, nette
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