Outlook of New Love

Expressive outlook brings out emotions quick
Bold duality glimmers and truly shines.
No separations desired between the pick.
Feelings envelope binding them just like vines
Devotion un-swayed by lies or any trick.
Separations each day build up like cheap wines
New love serves the soul, graces the minds visions
Chills, tingles the body, conveys new missions

Not wiser, integrated they explore much.
Tantalized, involved, imagining with time,
Forever the love will grow, along with such,
Fortitude with no need for failure to climb,
Their arms and bodies will always and now clutch.
While the passion with tenderness so sublime,
Builds each passing moment, till hours they submit.
To the pressures, formalities, forth to wit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 3:29 AM
Great one.. I am sure that it will be in the winner's circle..My Ottava Rima is totally fictional except it is about falling in love with poetry soup and other poetry internet sites..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:46 PM
A beautiful expression of love, Cecil. And you work with ease in the ottava rima form. Instead of a "first love" story, you gave us feelings! Bravo! Best wishes in the contest. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:33 PM
A grand write Cecil my friend and good luck in Jared's new contest with this difficult form.. u have done it proud with your expressive words ..with luv..
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry today Cecil. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 8:57 PM
i have to say that i hear your voice through your beautiful words, cecil.. a pleasure to read this agile poem which will surely be rated high in the contest... warmest, nette
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