Outdoors

It's colder than it should be.
I find myself surrounded by circles: 
nasty oranges and filthy yellows.

I realize my commitment to you is minimal.
But only because I have a greater commitment to me.
My pride is scarce,

and my selfishness is drowning me. 
You should be thankful for a drought
every now and then.

And it's not the act of being greedy
that disturbs me.
It's that the water is refreshing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 20, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Intriguing poetry Natahsa, this will have the readers pondering >> James
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