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It's colder than it should be. I find myself surrounded by circles: nasty oranges and filthy yellows. I realize my commitment to you is minimal. But only because I have a greater commitment to me. My pride is scarce, and my selfishness is drowning me. You should be thankful for a drought every now and then. And it's not the act of being greedy that disturbs me. It's that the water is refreshing.

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Date: 9/20/2010 11:03:00 AM
Intriguing poetry Natahsa, this will have the readers pondering >> James
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