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Outdidded Myself

John John said I outdidded myself today Decided to celebrate with a lewd display I'll still wear my knickers Stay away from the liquor Did someone say “lick her” I'm game need I say

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/9/2017 8:30:00 AM

You certainly are master of the play on words. I sit in awe and love each ditty.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 9:23:00 AM

You sit in awe??? Is that not messy? Oh I see... it's a play on words!!! Love from me to you Miss Patricia!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/9/2017 8:25:00 AM

I said you were outdiddling yourself//like a recalcitrant elf//But outdidded works//its one of the perks//of hanging out there on your shelf. (just love the word recalcitrant!) DIDDS AWAY JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 9:37:00 AM

Recalcitrant... "having an obstinately uncooperative attitude toward authority or discipline" YIKES! Still don't know what it means!!! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 9:17:00 AM

Gotta look that one up! Will I like what I read??? Hmmm exciting!!! I'M A-DIDDLING SIR JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2017 7:07:00 AM

No licking allowed! This is a family oriented poem...or is it? lol! What a grand poem this one is my friend! You have written a stunning and hilarious piece this morning! What a funny poem, Great Work!! No licking the wrong thing Jackson!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 7:16:00 AM

Family oriented???? Methinks not! LOL