Out With the Old

New year's day
still as grey
so they say.
Not me, nay;
let's away;

chase the sun.
Have some fun
with my son
and my hun;
old un's done.


What's New Poetry Contest, placed 1st
Sponsored by: Joseph May  
Date wrote: 10th January 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, "Out with the old." May this be a great year for all. Have a blessed day.....................
Miller Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:34 AM
Thank you, Paula, have a great New Year yourself, Terry.
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:52 AM
A great positive outlook, Terry! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Miller Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:35 AM
Thank you so much, Kim; blessings back, Terry.
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:13 PM
The poem 'Out with the Old' is beautifully written in this new style. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments.
May Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Very nicely penned Terry, Congrats on your win..
Miller Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 12:34 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for the placement, comments, and for running the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 4:37 PM
oh I love this. I sure hope I can work on one tonight
Miller Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Thank you, Andrea; I had fun writing it; I may do a couple more. Good luck with yours. I'll lookout for it.
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