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Out to sea 5-7-5 Haiku

The ship drifts to sea Behind left is a life loved Though it just can't be

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Date: 3/12/2015 10:08:00 PM
a sad feeling shown by your poem! congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 3/12/2015 12:38:00 PM
lovely images - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:11:00 PM
the tide waits for no ship or person . . . though it is hard to see it happen. Nicely done!
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Date: 12/9/2014 1:56:00 PM
Is this about a loved one buried at sea? or someone leaving on a ship with a loved one left behind? Sorry, I might be reading the wrong thing into this Haiku. Christmas Blessings, Darlene
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