Out On the Veranda

Warm sunshine did beckon come out
North wind did threaten chill
Hummingbird windchime played a tune
But it was cold on the hill

Just a few minutes with nature
Enjoying bird calls fine
See the effect of sun, wind,_rain
'Pon the tall Georgia Pine  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Yes still cold on the hill, but not for long.... lovely Sara
Situation Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 6:01 PM
when i lived in Atlanta my uncle had an expression "high as a georgia pine"
Manassian Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Lovely, Sara. You always remind us of the wonder that is around us. Well, different natural wonders here than where you are, but wonders none the less. Lovely choice of words. Thanks for the visit, Hugs@
Sivey Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 2:56 PM
That is such a lovely sight, the sun, wind, and the rain, all at one time is an experience to have! And I have experienced all three at once before, and the northern winds are very chilling! I have seen Georgia pine, and they are majestic in their stature my friend! You poem was a grand experience, something I am glad to have read! What a spectacular piece, very awesome write, Great Work!!
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 2:50 PM
love this lovely write, my friend - I can imagine all this
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