Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Out of Water

Out Of Water

Eternal suffering
Fresh cleansing rain,
regain
Harmonic smells so wonderful,
restores impressions in your mind of ocean shores

Rainbows of prism refracting,
colors that are spellbinding
red, orange, yellow, green, blue, Indigo, violet
mixtures mystifier of lights and shadows aver

Cleansing the air,
beautify and reign over azure suggestive buttermilk sky

Green crisp canopies of forest trees
Tall, lush emerald green grass that sway in the breeze
coverlets of ferns, climbing vines embroidered through trees
and stray flowering plants that grants
a playground for musical birds that perch or fly to the skies,
enchanting dance of the butterflies, and an orchestra of the wild,
a spiritual wonder all thirst for shelter and pure clean water

Glacier’s abundance surplus
Beautiful lustrate waterfalls so gracious
Running water through rocks and sand,
adding to erosion of filtrating

The voice of the future echoes a plea
An epiphany

Purge memories shall come to cease
Dearth of rain
Yearning thirst will attain
Drought, dehydration, famine, poverty,
sickness, anguish wildlife perishes
Eternal suffering and losses

The future beseeches


2/17/2015

Contest: Out of Water
Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper

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JC Brul June 18, 2021 at 1:35 AM What a majestic write! Congratulations dear Eve! Warm wishes!

Paul Callus April 5, 2015 at 8:00 AM Back again Eve, this time with some more comments:) Your abundant imagery appeals to the senses. The benefits of water are much in evidence, so are the negative prospects that can haunt humanity were we to be short of it. Congrats on a lovely win. // paul Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 9:16 AM Awe!! Thank you, Paul, I do truly appreciate, your wonderful inspiring compliment. Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Sandra Haight April 4, 2015 at 7:20 PM You wonderfully paint the majesty of water, Eve, and then the anguish and death without it. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Eve Roper April 4, 2015 at 7:58 PM Sandra, thank you for the wonderful inspiring compliment. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday

Paul Callus February 25, 2015 at 4:13 PM This is beautiful, Eve! My little tanka on same theme fades into oblivion when compared to this. Love you cluster of images and the message that you pass along. #7 // paul Eve Roper April 4, 2015 at 7:57 PM Thank you, Paul,for the wonderful compliment and the 7. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday

Cherl Dunn February 18, 2015 at 2:18 PM Dear Eve. Great imagery lady, nicely done I give you a seven for your wonderful message, with each verse you build up to the complex of mankind better wake up or else, what will be leave to the future, good luck in the contest, cheri and thank you for your blessings on mine. Eve Roper February 18, 2015 at 6:08 PM Cherl, thank you, your wonderful compliment and inspiration. Scientist do predict a mega drought in the coming years of 2050 in the west of the USA, we do need to do something. Blessings dear friend eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 18, 2015 at 11:32 AM I repeat God has blessed your pen.Amazing ..a master stroke....love Eve Roper February 18, 2015 at 6:03 PM I love the repeat performance my dear friend, you are always welcome to place your input. Thank you again sir, and blessings again to you and your family.

Connie Marcum Wong February 17, 2015 at 8:03 PM Your tribute to fresh water and how we will suffer the loss of it is simply brilliant Eve! An outstanding entry that we should see high on the winner's list. 7 for me Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 9:00 PM Thank you, Connie, for the high 7 and your wonderful inspiring comment. Blessings dear friend Eve

Emile Pinet February 17, 2015 at 4:53 PM Your descriptive wording and great imagery bring this piece to life showing us the beauty and importance of water. Emile. Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 10:55 PM Emile, thank you for your compliment in your. There is so much more to be said. Blessings eve

Tim Smith February 17, 2015 at 3:44 PM This beautiful Eve with such a powerful message...hugs Tim Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 10:54 PM Thank you, dear friend, I love nature as you can tell by my poems. Blessings eve

Demetrios Trifiatis February 17, 2015 at 1:10 PM Paradise and paradise lost! Reading your poem up to the middle I saw creation as ought to and after as we have made it to look after our intervention which proves the wisdom of God and the foolishness of Man, dear Eve! Extraordinary and vibrant images that captivates the soul of the reader! A seven! Good luck! God bless you! Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 11:02 PM Thank you, Demetrios, for your wonderful words of encouragement. I have moved to an area that they have done so much damage to the environment. Building bigger and more expensive homes and malls. And the poor animals are lost and our wonderful clean air taken away. It saddens me to think that money is more important than our environment.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2015 at 11:47 AM - Eve, a skilled write ...wooow !! - I wish you best of luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 11:05 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the encouragement. Blessings dear friend eve

Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 10:58 AM You filled my head with so many vibrant images Eve - the final line speaks volumes - who knows what the future brings but too much or too little water bring so many issues to those unfortunate people:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 1:43 PM This is what a study ,Climate Scientists Predict Decade Long Droughts For Much of America. The study puts the chances of a megadrought in the central plains and southwest sometime between 2050-2099 at above 80%. This is something to start thinking about. Thank you for the 7 and compliment, dear friend

Neva Romaine February 17, 2015 at 9:44 AM Hey Eve, so beautifully imagined and written. A pleasure to read and thanks for sharing this. Be Blessed, Neva Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 11:06 PM Thank you, Neva, for your compliment. Blessings eve

Poesy Relish February 17, 2015 at 9:18 AM beautiful imagery... and a great pen Eve... best for the contest.. love,nad! Eve Roper February 17, 2015 at 11:07 PM Thank you, Poesy, I am learning from all of you. Blessings eve